Tuesday 12 May 2009

Wonder food/ 要你命? pills (story outline)

Wonder food / (要你命?) pills:

1. A happy family eats dinner together chit-chatting.

2. Wonder food/ 要你命? pills commercial 1:
(Includes quench thirst, healthy, no need to pass out like normal food, comes in all flavors etc.)

3. The family discusses about the pill
(Elaborate on the pill. Like how efficient it is --safe time, convenient, how much power somebody heard it gives etc.)

4. They buy the pills

5. They have it for dinner one night. All pills on a plate on the big round table, everyone come together, sit down, take pill, put in mouth, smile, and go off to their respective corners of the stage to do what they do. (Like, dad: talks on the phone with documents in hand, mom: typing on computer, son/ daughter: studying, grandma: watching TV)

6. Commercial 2:
(Why wait? Get pill now! Everyone’s doing it, don’t lose out.)

7. People In the family gets even busier. Like dad got 1 meter high work load, mom got numerous phone calls, son/ daughter exam stress, grandma died but no one noticed.

8. RING! It’s Dinner time. Everyone gets up from their seats, walks to table with some still having worked in their hands, get pill and without looking at each other walks their separate ways. (All prorating extremely busy businessmen, honor students etc.

9. They walk (mom and dad goes back stage, both on the phone, son/ daughter came, cleared up the set-- table)

10. (Scene changes to street.) People lined up to get pill and eat them (robotically) while Mom and dad walked by each other. (When Mom and Dad are about to pass each other, slow motion, then once they pass, back to normal speed)

-END-

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